On 6/28/11 11:55 AM, "Franz-Stefan Preiss" <FR...@zurich.ibm.com> wrote:
The most noteworthy change is the insertion
of Section 3 'Attribute Predicate Profile'.
The existing content was moved to Section
2 'Protocol' and Section 5 'Conformance' was updated.
Looks good. They're going to ding you on Conformance though unless you
point to specific document sections containing the normative material.
I also reformatted the references according
to the citation rules given in the original Template document sent by
Robin
Cover.
Looks fine. You still need to add the voting member list into Appendix A,
and either fill in a document history or remove Appendix B.
I would also suggest adding a normative reference to the latest Approved
Errata. I think that's a good practice with newer specs.
I'm still unsure whether, given the
changes made, a Section 'Bindings' as done in Section 3 in the 'SAML V2.0
Change Notify Protocol Version 1.0' [1], is needed in the document.
I don't think so.
-- Scott
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