Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0 - Kim Goolsby - org.oasis-open.lists.soa-eerp

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Subject:	Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0
From:	Kim Goolsby (kim....@oasis-open.org)
Date:	Oct 18, 2010 5:07:28 pm
List:	org.oasis-open.lists.soa-eerp

Thanks Szu. I will upload these in the morning. Best, Kim

2010/10/18 eerp...@changfeng.org.cn <eerp...@changfeng.org.cn>

Kim,

There are still CD03 on the following namespace documents:

- http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/bqos/200903 - http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/rt/200903 - http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/sla/200903

Please copy the new version (CD04) from

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39844/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis sion-package.zip.

Let me know if you need any thing from me for the public review submission.

Best regards,

Szu Chang

Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0

From: Kim Goolsby <kim....@oasis-open.org> To: eerp...@changfeng.org.cn Date: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 16:27:26 -0400

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---- Szu,

Thanks for noticing. I'll upload the correct namespace document now.

Regards, Kim

2010/10/15 eerp...@changfeng.org.cn <eerp...@changfeng.org.cn>

Kim,

It looks good for all links, except the namespace document is not updated. The previous submission package has some typo on the namespace document, and the new version can be found @

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39844/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis sion-package.zip.

Please use the namespace document from this zip file.

Regards,

Szu Chang

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----------------- 發件人: Kim Goolsby kim....@oasis-open.org 日期: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 14:57:11 -0400 收件者: eerp...@changfeng.org.cn, soa-...@lists.oasis-open.org, mary...@oasis-open.org 主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0

Hi all,

All specs are uploaded. Please take a look & let me know of any comments.

Thanks, Kim

On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 2:08 PM, eerp...@changfeng.org.cn < eerp...@changfeng.org.cn> wrote:

Kim,

All required changes for SOA-EERP bRating spec are fixed, and new version of specs are uploaded onto TC repository @ http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The whole submission package is uploaded onto

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis

sion-package.zip< http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA -EERP-PR02-submission-package.zip>

Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission package.

Regards,

Szu Chang

Original Message:

----------------- From: Kim Goolsby kim....@oasis-open.org Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:49:30 -0400 To: soa-...@lists.oasis-open.org, mary...@oasis-open.org Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofService Version 1.0

*TCADMIN-254 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>* * * * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all,

My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions are just that, suggestions only.

Please make the following changes to this document: * * * * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>** 1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change from

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxxto

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx . That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.

2. In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.h

tml%0D< http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specific ation.html%0D>

xxx< http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specificatio n.xxx>

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification

.<h ttp:// docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.htm l> xxx.

3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to regular weight.

4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change from

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p

df< http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specificatio n.pdf>

http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd

f< http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification. pdf>

, removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the previous version.

5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006.

6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.

7. Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf versions.

Please contact me with any questions or comments.

Best regards, Kim *

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