I marked up the document with some proposed changes.

Hal

From: John Tolbert [mailto:john...@boeing.com] Sent: Monday, May 07, 2012 2:28 PM To: xac...@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [xacml] Groups - Proposed response to Plasma uploaded

Submitter's message Attached is a draft of my proposed response to Plasma. Please review and make
comments and edits if needed. Once we are in agreement about the content, I
would like for us (as the TC) to submit a response to
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/plasma in accordance with the IETF draft
comment process.

Thanks -- Mr. John Tolbert

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Submitter: Mr. John Tolbert Group: OASIS eXtensible Access Control Markup Language (XACML) TC Folder: repository Date submitted: 2012-05-07 11:27:40