Mike is still the keeper I believe (I just did one section per our task for
this week, as promised - unless Mike has other suggestions).
Jacques Durand wrote:
Here is my iteration on the latest full version, addressing Serm's remarks.
(see <JD2> tags, that you'll have to remove after accepting the changes if
I do not have a problem with other edits.
I assume, Monica, that you are the acting editor for the main body of the
(we still need Mike's additions)