atom feed4 messages in org.oasis-open.lists.tagRe: [tag] Draft figures
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Subject:Re: [tag] Draft figures
From:Stephen Green (step@documentengineeringservices.com)
Date:Oct 31, 2008 5:56:48 am
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With figure 1:

it looks very clear and makes good sense to me

maybe Conformance Clause should appear inside the Specification box

maybe instead of, e.g., 'is fulfilling' and 'is derived from', etc it would be better with 'fulfils', 'derives from', etc

Figure 2 - looks good to me

2008/10/29 Durand, Jacques R. <JDur@us.fujitsu.com>

tentative drafts for the 2 first figures of the guideline. For review.

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