A general comment: adding a couple of external URLs in the definition of the FLOSS is quite dangerous, they are subject to changes and could invalidate the license. I'm referring to the section:

"Due to the many variants of some of the above licenses, we require that any version follow the 2003 version of the Free Software Foundation's Free Software Definition (http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html) or version 1.9 of the Open Source Definition by the Open Source Initiative (http://www.opensource.org/docs/definition.php)."

It could be safer to add them in appendix as enclosed documents.